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When You Wake Up
Every thing is different when you wake up
You know no one
You have no control over what happens
When you wake up
Life is not a dream
When you wake
There is pain
When you wake up
You can not stop the sorrow
Inflicted on you and others
When you wake up
There is nothing but a clear mind
You can not hide from the true
When you wake up darkness is light
And light is darkness
When you wake up
You can not dream
You can not dream of a better world
A world were there is no death
No pain, no reality
When you wake up
You can love
You can feel
When you wake up
you can truly be happy
this only a tast so please be patiant for more
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kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!..i loved it!..the part that you say that you cant dream when you weak up, but eventhough started so sadly realistic you ended it with a touch of hope!
but i do like your way to. and true it can sound like that, and maby it should sound like that
ACTUALLY what i was trying to say is that when you are dreaming or asleep you are happy. and manny people think if they staid in there dreams they would be happy. not having to face the world. but when you sleep you can not enjoy life to its fullest. but you can see it as you want, a poem a picyure , and countless other things can be seen in diferent ways by countless people. just read it and see what you see.
in other words stop dreaming people and face reality. It's better than you think. ^_^ I like it. Good job!
Good job! Keep writing!!!
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*blush* ya i dont like ending sadly enless that is what i am going 4
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29.05.2008 04:31 PM