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the fantisy world:the begging of dreamz

CHAPTER ONE: IN MY WORLD    

 

Dear fellow human, I come from a place, a place that know only know about. If human life has found this messege,then I shall tell u of my world that after today is no more

They say this world was destroyed finely, due to war and revenge, and more than likely violince.the world was filled with so much negative energy the most deadliest cosmic reaction accured,which caused piece of this world to scatter into are forming universe, that helped form are solar system.

This great world was called zara,but others called it the fantasy world. Once one earth the early elders explained that not any one could describe the energy, accept for one word...supernatural. This was the end of that world, for the elders knew that earth their new home. Time had passed and the elders died and in the year of 3031 a.c a new evolution of man and animal formed.

Are story takes place in future Japan, during the celebration of the new moon, a new empire named DO--NONG ,had took his place on the dragon thrown, for he his self was a half man half dragon. he controlled the land and the reconstruction of the ever lasting great wall of china, which now was constructed to cover most of south Japan and splitting Tokyo, the countries' capital .Do-nong added a new region called "KANTORA",which was named after DO-NONG's great elder,rakiko,who for told the ending of the fantasy world. the recent descendent of the f-world queen was planning the assassination of DO-NONG,akasha morazukie.

iee-kago moriazukie,was one of the more advance humans, she hade a type of radiation like most of the other advanced humans. She was never happy with the powers she was gifted with,shu ja,her name the art of shape shifting. Which gave her a chance to change into my master DO-Nong.this gave her a chance to rule the country and harm humans that stood in her way.

If you are wondering who I am, I’m the warrior pyro,the shoji f-fighter.im on an


in a great universe befor are world lived a more advance world of magic,of dreamerz and thinkerz alike.where creater and man stayed in harmony,in which a greater good ruled over untile the fall of their nation...

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*pop* as well and also their was no chapter two and i was looking foward to it but whatever =]

2008-07-27 11:25:34


this was good =]

2008-07-27 11:22:17


wow over a 105+ people have seen this and not a single pop,well got to give the people what they want!

2008-05-14 15:32:44


thanx 4 checking it out,b looking at 4 more fiction from me

2008-01-20 08:20:32


i love it! you had alot of grammer errors though. but all in all it was very good! i can't wait to read more! thank you for posting it on the K.I.S clan!

2008-01-14 19:44:11


I like it I hope u post more

2008-01-10 12:16:03


what do u guyez thnk so far...

2008-01-06 09:40:58


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