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The totally new enhanced version of Sasuke and Jasmine

Name: Hayate Jasmine
Her age: 14, one year older then Sasuke
Sex: female
Hair Design: long black hair to her butt, usually in ponytails
Eye color: ice blue
Height: 5'5
Cloths: usually wares shorts, camouflage tanktops, and zori
Sibling: has a sister named, Hayate May, her age is 17
Past: Jasmine lost her parents because her sister. She says that she was tired of having to obey and listening to them, so she killed them.

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Hi, my name Hayate Jasmine. My parents have been killed by my sister, and for that I must avenge, and for that I must be stronger, and for that I must find a person named Sasuke Uchiha and must get guidance from him. I don't anything about him, but I know he is very strong, and must train with him... I am now entering the Leaf village where I think I might find him. As I enter I see a pink haired girl standing around, and go up to her.
Sakura- Hi, I'm Sakura. Are you new here?
Jasmine- Yes, I'm new here, and I'm Jasmine. Could you tell me where the ramen bar is around here? I'm starving.
Sakura- Sure! Is there anything else you would like to know?
Jasmine- No, that will be all, but thanks.
As I enter the ramen bar I see a boy eating ramen and sit beside him.
Naruto- Hi, what's your name? My names Naruto Uzumaki! Are you new here at the village?
Jasmine- It's nice to meet you Naruto. My name is Jasmine, and yes I am new here.
Naruto- Do you like ramen? I love ramen!
Jasmine- I like ramen, but don't love it.
I smile, he smiled and blushed.
Naruto- I like your smile. I want mine like that.
Jasmine- Why, thank you!
Sakura enters the ramen bar with a black haired boy, we looked at each other with blank looks.
Naruto- Hey, Sakura look at my new friend Jasmine!
Sakura- I know her Naruto, I meant her at the gate a while ago.
Naruto- Hey Sasuke, why don't you say hi to Jasmine? I looked at Naruto with a sudden surprised look. Jasmine-*Is this the Sasuke I'm looking for?! *
Sasuke- Hi.
Jasmine- It's nice to meet you to Sasuke. Umm do you think I could stay with one of you guys for a while? I'm not going to be here in this village for to long, I could cook every night as a thank you.
Naruto- Can you cook ramen?
Jasmine- I can cook anything, if it's okay with Naruto I could cook some dinner for everyone.
Naruto- It's okay with me just as long as you cook some ramen! Naruto had an excided look.
Jasmine- Okay, that should be no problem! So how about it?
Sakura- Okay!
Sasuke- Whatever.
We all walked home, Naruto getting a big table ready for everyone while I got cooking. I made ramen, curry, fish, rice balls, sushi, and green tea.
~Knock, knock.~
Jasmine- Can you get that Naruto, I'm still a little busy. Please and thank you.
Naruto- Okay!
I had everything I cooked on the table ready for everyone to eat.
Sakura- Jasmine I hope you don't mind us bringing Kakashi sense along.
Jasmine- No, I don't mind, the more the merrier. I smiled as a gray haired man came in, he looked around the age of 20 or older maybe.
Kakashi- Hello, Jasmine right?
Jasmine- Yes, it is nice to meet you Kakashi. I just got done with the food so it's very fresh.
We all set down at the table and started to eat. After we ate, we all went in a circle talking alittle about ourselves.
Sakura-Well we all know that Naruto loves ramen.
Naruto- Ramen, ramen, and more ramen!
Naruto had a huge grin on.
Sasuke- And we know Sakura likes nothing, but me.
Sakura- Sasuke-kun is so cool.
She squeaked loudly.
Sakura-We also know that Kakashi sense is a pervert.
Kakashi smiled with a pervertily laughed, I giggled a little.
Sakura- Hey, Jasmine why don't you tell us a little about yourself.
I looked at Sakura with a twist of a smile and frown.
Jasmine- I really don't like to, but I guess I can. Well I have an older sister that 17 and....                                                                                                                                                                                Sakura- And What?
Jasmine- Well....
Sakura- Well what? 
Naruto- Yeah Spit it out!                                                                                                                                                                                                     I looked at Naruto in surprise.        
Jasmine- I don't like to talk about her because, that older sister of mine... killed my parents.
The room filled with silent.
Jasmine- After she killed my parent I felt I if was left alone in the world and had to get stronger. I am going to kill her with my own hands, I'm not going to let her die anyother way.                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Sasuke looked up in surprise.
Sasuke-*I don't know alot about this girl, but I have to learn more about her...she's alittle like me in a way.*
Kakashi- So I see we have another one that lost their parents because of a sibling. Sakura looked at me with a frown.
Jasmine- For me, her death is the only way I'll ever be turely free in the world. It sounds like it's not to big of a deal to other people, but they were killed right infrount of my face and I couldn't do anything. My parents were the most precious things to me when I was a kid, ever sence they died I couldn't feel happiness, nothing made me happy anymore.
Kakashi- I see why you want to kill her so badly now. Well sorry to run out on you at such an early time, but I have a few things to do before I go to sleep tonight. So I'll see everyone around later.
Kakashi walked over to me and rubbed my head with a smile.
Jasmine- It's okay I don't mind, good night Kakashi sense.
I smiled.
Sasuke, Naruto, Sakura- Night Kakashi sense.
Kakashi waved good bye and left out the house.
Sakura-So Jasmine, how old where you when she killed your parents? Sakura looked over at me with sad eyes.
Jasmine- I was only 8. Before she left she told me she wanted to kill them so she could be free of their orders and demands and so I would feel pain. Before she left the last thing she told me was that she wanted to see how hard it would be to defeat me when I got older and stronger. I still remember it so clearly, that smile she had when she said that.
I grinted my teeth down.
Sakura- That’s sad.
Jasmine- Don't worry about me...I will get stronger and defeat her, that's a promise.
I smiled at Sakura to make her stop feeling bad for me.
Jasmine- As long as I don't see her face for a while I'll be fine.                                                                                                                                                                                                                       I looked down at my hands.
Naruto- Well, I'm going to go to sleep now.
Naruto yawned.
Jasmine- Good night Naruto.
Naruto- Nighty, Nighty.
Naruto walked to his room and shut the door.
Jasmine- Well I'll see you guys tomorrow, night.
Sakura walks out the door before Sasuke and I. She started heading off to her house, as I'm about to shut the door to the house, Sasuke stops me.
Sasuke- Jasmine, can I talk to you?
Jasmine- Sure, what's up?
I go out the door following Sasuke, we go to a tree outside with no one around.
Sasuke- Is that true what you just told us a minute ago? Your sister killed your parents, what about your village?
Jasmine- Yes...of course, I don't lie about my past to anyone. My village is just fine as far as I know, I was just in yesterday.
Sasuke- Do you know my brother did the same thing to my parents and clan?
Jasmine- Yes, and I have something to ask you.
I looked down at my feet, the back at him.
Jasmine- Sasuke will you please help me get stronger? Please, I will do anything for you.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Sasuke looked at me surpirsed.
Sasuke- Are you sure you need my help? Isn't there anyone else that can help you? He looked me in the eyes, I looked at him in surprise. It's the first time I've seen eyes filled with so much hate that are much worse then mine.
Jasmine- No, only you can help me Sasuke. You are the only one I know that’s kind of like me, I'm glad I finally found you. As a child I heard alot about you, people used to say that we where alittle alike just it was my sister that did it the killing, and my sister didn't kill my village as well. They used to tell me that I should visit you some day, so I thought that if I did visit you...you could help me. And, if you cannot I'll try to figure out something I guess.
I looking the other way , blushing. His eyes for some odd reason really stunned me.
Sasuke- ...Okay I'll help you, but under one condition...try not to do anything weird, ok?
Jasmine- Oh um of course, thank you so much Sasuke.
I gave him a bow, a hug, and a fast kiss on the cheek.
Jasmine- Goodnight Sasuke, and thank you again.
I bowed again and ran into Naruto's house.

End of chapter one, hope u liked ^_^ plz don't forget to pop/comment for me.


Ok I sorry I might be annoying u about this, but I've been working on this story for the past I think 2 years lol lol so I'm kindda trying to make it perfect. So for those who that have read it plz read this better version of it. And those of u who haven't read it, plz read this I guess really good romance/drama/action story. Plz pop and comment if u like it ^_^ love, Hayate Jasmine

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It's really good!!!!!!!!1

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