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Chapter1 Encounter (part 3)

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Chapter1 Encounter (part 3)

Damn!!! scoweled Tyrell as he put down Chloe. Fighting Style: Capoeira!!! yelled Tyrell as he moved in a dancing rythem formation. Get him! yelled another upperclassmen. Three of the upprclassmen charged at Tyrell, bad idea. said Tyrell as he spun around and stood on his hands in a breakdance form. Hurricane kick!!! yelled Tyrell as he spun around and triple kicked the uperclassmens back. Then Tyrell spun back around to his feet. Well had enough? taunted Tyrell. Then all eight upperclassmen surronded Tyrell, and three of them had knifes. Crap! mummured Tyrell. Tyrell!!! yelled Chloe. As Tyrell turns around he see's that one of the uppeclassmen with a knife to Chloe's neck. YOU BASTEREDS!!!!! yelled Tyrell. POW!!! Mysterous person hits the upperclassmen behind his head. What the? is the only word that escapes the upperclassmens mouth. Big Ed? exclaimed Tyrell. Yeah that be me. you ok? asked Big Ed? yes I fine. Responed Chloe. Big Ed is his nickname his real name is Edward Williams, he's 19 years old and is 6ft tall he's been lik a brother to me. Looks like you need help. said Big Ed. Maybe depends on the fight. jived Tyrell. Big Ed then runs in and rams down three of the uprclassmen. Out of my way!!!! yelled Big Ed. Lets Go!!!! yelled Tyrell as he  ran up and kicked two upperclassmen. Then two of the upperclassmen wih knifes came across and cut Tyrells arms each. Big Ed ran up and heisman two other upperclassmens in the jaw and knocked them out cold leaving six left. Afterthat first strike Big Ed didn't notice the other two upperclassmen with knifes an got cut on each side of his arms. aaahhhh!!! yelled Big Ed. Quickly Tyrell helped Big Ed take down the upperclassmen with knifes. Quickly Twin Heisman!!!!  yelled Tyrell and Big Ed as they both knocked out the upperclassmens with knifes and sent them flying to the wall. Four more. said Big Ed. Watch this!!! said Tyrell as he stood on his hands in a little pain from the cuts and spun and kicked three to the tree. Whirlwind kick!!!! I got the last one! said Big Ed as he cracked his knuckles. The last upperclassmen look at Big Ed in fear as he walked towards him. Heismen Style: Rising Dragon uppercut!!!! yelled Big Ed as he punched him as hard as he could. By the end of the fight both were cut and bruised. Are you guys ok? asked Chloe worriedly. Yeah were fine we're use to this kind of pain. said Tyrell. Ok we need to get both of you two the clinic.

Sorry it took me so long to finish chapter1 but tells me's howit is and i'll get to ya. please anyone who reads this please leave a comment so i'll know what to do on my next chapter.

Next time on A promising Love

Will Tyrell or Chloe reveal feelings for each other? Is there gonna be trouble between the love life? tune in next time for:

A PROMISING LOVE.


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here's the final part chapter1 here you go enjoy

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cool i cant wait and once again amazing *pop*

21.06.2008 04:13 AM


its really good cant wait to read the rest!!XD

29.05.2008 03:36 AM


Great,story keep posting,Later!!

17.05.2008 07:09 AM


wow that is a great ist chapter i cant wait to read the entire book

08.05.2008 01:08 AM


i liked it keep it coming

01.05.2008 06:04 PM


it kinda sounds like a soap opera if this was a tv show i would definitely watch

01.05.2008 03:15 PM


awesome u got me interested! i want more lol

30.04.2008 10:57 PM


awsome

27.04.2008 09:21 PM


it is good if u want my oppinion i think u should keep the drama going by waiting to tell if they tell eachother how one another feels.

27.04.2008 07:03 PM


Attrocious, quit putting gansters anti-snitchers in the story.

27.04.2008 05:04 PM


i cant wait tell the next story

27.04.2008 02:32 AM


yay! another 1.^^*pop* keep on writing,k?

27.04.2008 02:23 AM


more more more!!!!

26.04.2008 09:27 PM


whirlwind kick!!!!!!!!!! thats awesome

26.04.2008 09:26 PM


awww ahah i love it XD

26.04.2008 06:18 PM


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