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Furture ^ ^

Ok be gentely. I wrote this in like 5min. its to my boyfriend.

If you could be here,

would our hearts be complete?

Would it make everything else clear

Or would you let yourself dwell in the realm of defeat?

For now we have these sweet illusions

of how life will be when your finally home.

I'll let you in if you leave out the chaotic confusion.

And mabey together we can be happy in the furture years to come.

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Tags: together,  furture  Added 2008-01-18 14:57:53
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not bad!

SECHS


2008-04-15 21:03:46


i like it. very ggod for a five minute poem!

JAZZYJAZZ1213


2008-01-27 14:12:39


Very good for being written in 5 minutes.

SUNSHADOW


2008-01-19 10:01:39


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