ART + LIFE
Talk of the wind
The wind
Its sweet whisper
Subdues my temper
Temperate breeze
Its kiss a rumour
Taming my spirit
The melody
Its embrace a promise
Breaking my courage
The gust
It awakens a regret
Stirring up valour
The wind
Its sweet whispers
Brings me love
A poem that a friend inspired me to write, it also fits a character in one of my fictions.... maybe even me
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niao^^ this poem reminds me of Otoha, da spirit of the sound of wind, from the anime H2O : Footprints in the Sand
BLUESORROW
2008-06-15 18:23:19
Yes i wanted the conradictory to standout! not to sound deep or wise just in the foolish of our own thoughts at times.
SHY0NE1
2008-05-12 07:28:20
Hm. Interesting. Almost all of the stanzas are contradictory. I'm not quite sure if I understand... D: There are a lot of writers who do that to sound deep and wise, but trust me on this: it never works, at least not for the smart readers. Of course, I could just be stupid, and have missed the entire point... O_o;; You'll have to see what everyone else thinks about this. But I do like the first and last stanzas. The repitition was nice, and the meaning there was clear and easily connected to. :)
MXSKAI
2008-05-11 18:53:12
One of your characters? I would say that maybe its Kai? Careful girl you are getting all moody on me again. O.O
LITTLEBRO
2008-05-10 00:07:02