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Destiny Chapter 1

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Destiny Chapter 1

DESTINY
Chapter1
Destiny’s String- Invasion of Casikan


Christina: Hmm (answers her cell phone) hello.
Strider: Christina, where are you!
Christina: I’m in garden, why are you yelling, is something wrong.
Strider: You can see Sector West, look
Christina: Ahh! The Mesallian Wall!
Strider: It’s an invasion; me and Jevan got everything under control so stay there!
It’s dangerous here.
Christina: What! No, you gu…
Jevan: (cuts her off) No Christina, stay home… Christina, Christina! Dude, she hung up.
Strider: Hmm, Huh! Jevan, watch out!

Christina grabs her jetboard and jumps off her garden in the sky to the scene.

Monsters start pouring out of the airship as it continues to invade the city. Strider and Jevan start to fight off the monsters.

Jevan: Everybody, get out of here now!
Civilian: What the hell can you do, huh!
Jevan: Save your sorry ass, now get the hell out of here, now.
Civilian: Whatever (he runs off with the crowd)
Strider: Jevan lets go!
Jevan: Right!

Jevan readies out his sharp-gun, The Scrapstar, while Strider transforms his amulet into a long sword. They then run toward the huge mob of monsters with that seems infinite through their eyes. Jevan starts the fight off by jumping in the air and using his multiple shot, Star Cannon, while Strider uses his Razor Sword to slash cutting winds at the enemies. They destroy the frontline.

Jevan: Strider! Use that Rapid Wave!

Strider spins his sword and causes a wave of visible winds to wipe out a majority of his enemies. It has little effect as the monsters continue to pour in.

Strider: Jevan, We have to keep fighting!
Jevan: Dude, I know! (He looks at the ship) We have to get up there.
Strider: I know, but we have to hold those monsters off!
Jevan: Strider! Watch out!

Three monsters jump out at Strider….


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sweet*popp*

10.04.2008 12:35 AM


this is awesome man i cant wait until the manga you said will come out *pop*

28.12.2007 03:00 PM


thats good

05.10.2007 07:57 PM


O.o What will happen next *goes to read next part* *pop*

28.09.2007 09:06 PM


ohhh so far so good!

27.09.2007 12:27 PM


this is nice but it needs pics to understand it all. anyway, interesting! ^^

20.09.2007 06:15 PM


wow! thats really good. would love to see what kinda pix would go with it! ^^ *goes to read next chapter*

17.09.2007 09:29 PM


Very good love the idea of the story, keep it up can't wait to read the next one.

17.09.2007 01:00 AM


Woo...catchy! I like it! The suspend is so cool! ^_^

13.09.2007 02:42 AM


I likes it!

12.09.2007 01:52 AM


fairly intersting. i liked it. cilvilians r stupid. hehehehehe : P

11.09.2007 02:22 AM


Nice.

10.09.2007 03:35 AM


Very cool!! *goes to read the next one*

09.09.2007 05:28 PM


nice.......even though I don't know who the heck any of these people are. Butt still, nice. (Love the civilan and jevan confersation!!!!!)

04.09.2007 03:05 AM


I finally had time 2 read it it was cool!!!!!!!! ^^P

03.09.2007 05:16 PM


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