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Super Riceball Ch.1 The begaining of Super Riceball

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Super Riceball Ch.1 The begaining of Super Riceball

"ahhhh~ I love the smell of ramen in the mornin!" Ponichi said while he sat down in front of the tv ready to wacth his favorite show Kun Fu dude as he ate his bowl of ramen and he drinked green tea. As ponichi was chugging down the bowl of ramen a odd commericial came on right in the middle of  his show."Hey! My show! My Show! Ahhhh!Right when it was getting to the good part!"

"MuHaHaHa! We are the evil gang of takoyaki! Not the good Takoyaki! But the Bad ones! MuHaHaHa! and where taking over your tv an sticking on....ummmm....really boring shows! Yeah...Yeah thats it! MuHaHaHa!"The commerical said. "Whaaaaat!!!! No Way! Thats tottaly not cool! Nobody takes off my show! No One!" Ponichi jumped up with fury forgetting he had ramen on his lap.

The bowl of steaming ramen flew in the air and landed on his head."Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! It burns! The noddlely goodness burns!!!!Agggggggg!!! Ponichi yelled as he started to run around like a maniac waveing his hands in the air."Oh my gosh it burns! It burns!"  "OH Shut Up!  The mystyorius girl yelled splashing a bucket of cold water on his head."Ahhhhh~Thats soooo much better! Thanks!.....ummmmm....wait....uh....who are you .....and....uh....what are you doing in my house!?!? "I am ..." "Wait your not with those takoyaki dudes...right?" "no...." "Ok...good... because I was just about to attack you...ok....now as you where saying?"

 Tongue Out To be continued....bump bump bum! What will happen next!? Will Ponichi get his ever beloved show back?What do the takoyakis have planed?Whos the mystrious girl?Shocked  Who knows?  Surprised 






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If you need a good laugh` read this! FUNNY! FUNNY! FUNNY! Super Riceball is a Hilarious comedy about a riceball(Oniguri) on a wildly weird adventure! People say that its kinda like Ranama 1/2 an Bobobo-bobo-bobobo!

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lmao that's cute!! MORE ACTION!! lol a fighting riceball *snickers*

30.03.2008 02:25 AM


i only have 3 words to say. that was HIGH-LARIOUS!!!

24.02.2008 05:48 PM


loool :P

29.09.2007 11:30 AM


ha ha,noddlely!

08.09.2007 02:33 AM


nice

29.08.2007 10:44 PM


hee hee funny

03.08.2007 09:53 PM


this type of fiction infuriates me...

31.07.2007 04:11 AM


cool

25.07.2007 04:16 AM


It's really funny!

23.07.2007 03:09 PM


Realy funny LOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

03.07.2007 09:59 PM


:3 :D LOOOOOV iT....<3

25.06.2007 03:35 AM


...... *.*

16.04.2007 01:21 AM


Ramen splashing on one's head... OUCH!! O_O!! XD

12.04.2007 03:57 PM


that's halrious. ramen is good ^-^

01.04.2007 09:21 PM


Hee ^-^ That's funny. *pop* Hey can you read my fiction plz?

29.03.2007 07:31 AM


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