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ADDED: 12.08.2006
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"ahhhh~ I love the smell of ramen in the mornin!" Ponichi said while he sat down in front of the tv ready to wacth his favorite show Kun Fu dude as he ate his bowl of ramen and he drinked green tea. As ponichi was chugging down the bowl of ramen a odd commericial came on right in the middle of his show."Hey! My show! My Show! Ahhhh!Right when it was getting to the good part!"
"MuHaHaHa! We are the evil gang of takoyaki! Not the good Takoyaki! But the Bad ones! MuHaHaHa! and where taking over your tv an sticking on....ummmm....really boring shows! Yeah...Yeah thats it! MuHaHaHa!"The commerical said. "Whaaaaat!!!! No Way! Thats tottaly not cool! Nobody takes off my show! No One!" Ponichi jumped up with fury forgetting he had ramen on his lap.
The bowl of steaming ramen flew in the air and landed on his head."Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! It burns! The noddlely goodness burns!!!!Agggggggg!!! Ponichi yelled as he started to run around like a maniac waveing his hands in the air."Oh my gosh it burns! It burns!" "OH Shut Up! The mystyorius girl yelled splashing a bucket of cold water on his head."Ahhhhh~Thats soooo much better! Thanks!.....ummmmm....wait....uh....who are you .....and....uh....what are you doing in my house!?!? "I am ..." "Wait your not with those takoyaki dudes...right?" "no...." "Ok...good... because I was just about to attack you...ok....now as you where saying?"
To be continued....bump bump bum! What will happen next!? Will Ponichi get his ever beloved show back?What do the takoyakis have planed?Whos the mystrious girl?
Who knows?
lmao that's cute!! MORE ACTION!! lol a fighting riceball *snickers*
i only have 3 words to say. that was HIGH-LARIOUS!!!
loool :P
ha ha,noddlely!
nice
hee hee funny
this type of fiction infuriates me...
cool
It's really funny!
Realy funny LOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:3 :D LOOOOOV iT....<3
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Ramen splashing on one's head... OUCH!! O_O!! XD
that's halrious. ramen is good ^-^
Hee ^-^ That's funny. *pop* Hey can you read my fiction plz?
If you need a good laugh` read this! FUNNY! FUNNY! FUNNY! Super Riceball is a Hilarious comedy about a riceball(Oniguri) on a wildly weird adventure! People say that its kinda like Ranama 1/2 an Bobobo-bobo-bobobo!