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Haunted hill mansion~ Ch. 1
On a dark and dreary hill, laid a mansion, a haunted mansion in fact. There was a little town that lived just below that very hill. A town called hallowed nymph forest, where many little villagers lived. No one in that village has ever laid a foot upon that mansion ground. Not one so therefore it was a mystery to them. They have told tales about it but none of them where true. People have always wondered what walked the unknown ground.
On a sunny day a brave young man told his beloved wife he wanted to see what the mansion looked like, he was a curious young man at the age of 20. He was a writer and wrote many stories, he had writer’s block and began to run out of ideas and he needed new ones to write. He wanted to find new ideas and he thought this journey would be great for that. He thought a mysterious mansion would be great for a book. His wife was not pleased. She told him that this was a bad idea because no one knows what lies beyond the village grounds. She began to tug on his arm .It may be unsafe and you might get hurt or worse his wife said in a soft gentle tone. He pulled his arm away and refused to listen and began to pack his bag. He Stuck on his coat and kissed his wife goodbye. He told her that he should be back in a week or two and not to worry. As he walked out the door his wife began to wave and cried I shall wait until the moment you get back. I’ll miss you every second I wait. Please come back safe. He looked back and said I will… I promise that I will be safe and then headed out onto the long dirt covered road.
As the man was walking up the hill clouds began to form in the sky. He did not think that there was anything strange about it but he was wrong. As he got closer to the mansion more clouds began to form in the sky an then there was thunder. Rain started to poor. He started to run as fast as he could, trying to get to the mansion as soon as possible When he got to the front door of the house he was soaking wet. He felt a light breathing behind his neck but no one was there when he turned his head around.
As he reached out to the knob he heard the whisper “turn back…” He thought it was all in his imagination. He was hearing things he thought. As he touched the knob he felt scared and paused for a secound then began to turn it. Another whisper came to him. “I warned you~…heh heh heh~…” The clouds rumbled and lightning lit up the sky making a clamor. He shut his eyes an he shivered. Pulling his coat close to him with one hand he twisted the knob of the cobweb-covered door and opened it. The door creaked, making him nervous as he pushed it open. He walked slowly into the mansion.
It was dark. He could not see anything. It was like his eyes where blind folder. He pulled out a candle and lit it. The room lit up and everything was clear to him. “eeeeee! The lighhht~ hisssss” What was that, the man thought to him self. “Could it be…Ghosts...” the man whispered as he rubbed his chin. He pulled out his notebook and wrote:
Entry One, October 21
Strange voices come to me, like there could be spirits that I am not aware of…and the weather has become rainy and dark, This mansion is very dirty and has a spooky effect to it that brings chills…I feel that this story has just begun.. I call this mansion, Haunted Hill Mansion.
He closed his notebook an stuffed it back a away.
To be continued…. MU HAHAHA~
On a sunny day a brave young man told his beloved wife he wanted to see what the mansion looked like, he was a curious young man at the age of 20. He was a writer and wrote many stories, he had writer’s block and began to run out of ideas and he needed new ones to write. He wanted to find new ideas and he thought this journey would be great for that. He thought a mysterious mansion would be great for a book. His wife was not pleased. She told him that this was a bad idea because no one knows what lies beyond the village grounds. She began to tug on his arm .It may be unsafe and you might get hurt or worse his wife said in a soft gentle tone. He pulled his arm away and refused to listen and began to pack his bag. He Stuck on his coat and kissed his wife goodbye. He told her that he should be back in a week or two and not to worry. As he walked out the door his wife began to wave and cried I shall wait until the moment you get back. I’ll miss you every second I wait. Please come back safe. He looked back and said I will… I promise that I will be safe and then headed out onto the long dirt covered road.
As the man was walking up the hill clouds began to form in the sky. He did not think that there was anything strange about it but he was wrong. As he got closer to the mansion more clouds began to form in the sky an then there was thunder. Rain started to poor. He started to run as fast as he could, trying to get to the mansion as soon as possible When he got to the front door of the house he was soaking wet. He felt a light breathing behind his neck but no one was there when he turned his head around.
As he reached out to the knob he heard the whisper “turn back…” He thought it was all in his imagination. He was hearing things he thought. As he touched the knob he felt scared and paused for a secound then began to turn it. Another whisper came to him. “I warned you~…heh heh heh~…” The clouds rumbled and lightning lit up the sky making a clamor. He shut his eyes an he shivered. Pulling his coat close to him with one hand he twisted the knob of the cobweb-covered door and opened it. The door creaked, making him nervous as he pushed it open. He walked slowly into the mansion.
It was dark. He could not see anything. It was like his eyes where blind folder. He pulled out a candle and lit it. The room lit up and everything was clear to him. “eeeeee! The lighhht~ hisssss” What was that, the man thought to him self. “Could it be…Ghosts...” the man whispered as he rubbed his chin. He pulled out his notebook and wrote:
Entry One, October 21
Strange voices come to me, like there could be spirits that I am not aware of…and the weather has become rainy and dark, This mansion is very dirty and has a spooky effect to it that brings chills…I feel that this story has just begun.. I call this mansion, Haunted Hill Mansion.
He closed his notebook an stuffed it back a away.
To be continued…. MU HAHAHA~
Made just for halloween! >..<
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it awsome!
DWIN
2008-02-03 21:07:50
wow! really good..and spooky! :[ just in time for halloween! I like the journal idea.
MILKIE
2006-10-23 17:27:23
OMg!11 XD. i absoltutly love tis story. But where is the Dialog???? XP
HATEMANGA11
2006-10-23 06:58:42
NOOO!!!! what will happen next?! plz. write more! *pop*
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2006-10-17 10:02:20