“I guess Tanaka chan is fine…” “Now what do we do?” All of the sudden something flew thew a window breaking the glass. “ There goes another window….” “Its a message in a bottle.”Gre flew over and picked it up.Ponichis eyes lit up. “O! O! Read it! What does it say! Is it from my mommy! Did she send cookies~?” Gre popped of the cap of the bottle and pulled out the letter. “It says… This is the evil takoyaki’s speaking here, come to the super, spectacular, fantastic, great, awesome…yahda yahda yahda… evil takoyaki fair of super fun. We wellcoume?” Tanaka took a look at it. “They spelt it wrong! Those dummies! Don’t they know how to use spell check! Go ahead keep reading…” “We welcome one and all to come…and that’s all it says.” Ponichi raised his hand up and yelled, “Next stop…uh…what was it again?” “Evil takoyaki fair of super fun” “Right! Next stop evil takoyaki fair of super fun!!! Woooo!” Ponichi started to do a little dance out the door. Gre followed behind.
“whatever~ lets go…” Tanaka closed the door behind her.*plop* the door fell off. “Ponichi your house is falling apart!” Tanaka yelled. “Were goin to a fair! Were goin to a fair!” “yah! You say it Ponichi weechi! To the fair we go! Tee hee hee”Gre and ponichi started to dance. “those bimbos aren’t even paying attention to me~ for all they know the stupid house could be on fire….and they wouldn’t care! All they care about is the frickin fair!” Ponichi turned around. “Aren’t you coming Tanaka chan!? “Yah…” Tanaka replied and ran to their side. “Does she have to come…” Gre said in a snooty voice. Tanaka smacked her on the back of her head. “Ow! What was that for!” “For being an idiot!” Tanaka yelled “what! You! You! Big meanie!” Gre yelled back. “Ponichi tell her to shut up!” “I’m going to stay out of this …” Ponichi sat down and began to read a comic book. “You should shut up butterfly girl!” “I’m a fairy! F-A-I-R-Y Fairy! Miss bad attitude!” “I wouldn’t have a bad attitude if I wasn’t stuck with an moran!” “Don’t talk about ponichi that way!” “I was talking about You!”
The trees that were by them started to shake. “um…you guys…”Ponichi whispered. “ You know what Tanaka! I don’t like your tone!” “You mean YELLING get used to IT!!!! This is a FIGHT! YOU DUMMY!!!!!” Ponichi started to wave his arms. “You guys…pssssss…You guys…” Ponichi trew down his comic book and stuck a frown on his face than yelled. “YOU GUYS I THINK THERES SOMETHING!” “GROWL!!!!!HUNGRY!!!!” A giant panda crashed through the trees. “Ahhhhhhhh!!!!! It’s the panda!!!!!!!!” “Run!!!!!!”
To be continued!
What will happen next?!
Will they get to the fair safely!? 
Will Tanaka and Gre ever get along!? Stay tuned! Look out for Ch 11 !
I just want to give a shout out to all my super Riceball fans! Thank you for your support! Please tell your friends to read my fiction !
A Fight~ then to a fair!
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This rely grate
ZODIAC100
2008-05-14 19:10:43
ooooookk
DARKGURL1234
2007-08-29 15:10:21
this is so funny! write some more! *pop*
HARAJUKU8000
2007-05-12 14:43:56
I sill like it!
ANGELSCARAB
2006-12-22 14:35:17
LOL!! PANDA!! Keep up the good work!!;D
KYOSBALLERINA
2006-12-21 19:56:13
XD. Nice... ^_^
TAKURI
2006-12-21 17:42:49
lol! panda!!!!
FROGGYLOVE
2006-12-16 12:26:15
LOL i like this....keep going must read more ^-^
ANIMEGIRLSHINJU
2006-12-15 18:14:17
Haha! Za panda...
MILKIE
2006-12-12 17:17:02
Oh dang, the panda's back!
IMAGINARYGURL13
2006-12-08 14:33:51
yay!! panda! ^^ *pop*
JOKER9463
2006-12-03 15:56:57
panda! X3 Praise the almighty panda! i love this story!!! LMAO :D
MUSICPANDA731
2006-11-29 16:47:52
LOL, luv the panda bit lol
DARKSTAR69
2006-11-29 16:44:05
Yeah! I like this! Much different than my stories, and much more amusing than my AP physics homework! Yeah!
DOMRISO
2006-11-29 16:42:25
funny like always!
RLUPITA
2006-11-29 12:20:27