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bad writing

there is no more time

 i cant even ryhme

the minutes wage on for years

listeing to comments of my peers

 denial of my passion

at a loss for inspuration

 mind and body numb

 these poems have no sum

 just a bunch of meaningless words

written by a hopeless writer

taken this writting way to far

it will never be up to paar

 greater writers than me will come and go

 for this i am at peace to know

to finish what i have began

 now at the end of the rope

 i can finally let go

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thats good, good

BLUESWORDOFNK97


2008-07-09 09:19:53


awsome!

DREWPERKINS


2008-07-08 13:15:50


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