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Sinners!
God has come to watch before us And stare down upon our play Only hope he turns his shoulder For this is what He'd say, "Sinners" We are the ones who wreak the havoc day to day it comes without any warning when it turns dark, we all do these things everyone; can't escape; thoughts in our head... "Sinners" And for some dusk drives the soul amiss burns a bloody passion inside that grows and weather it be violence, drugs, sex or alcohol God's watching down and seeing, eyes on us all "Sinners" Should we repent to these natural actions Shall i degrade myself upon my knees Yet i find myself on the floor in my closet With my switchblade; carved a cross on my wall And with tears running down my face i whisper, "God, i am a Sinner." And somewhere deep in all the town A strong inner voice booms througout Sinners, Sinners, have you heard? Yes, you have sold yourselves to the Devil. You're far past repentance now. "Sinners!" Yes, God, the unforgiving, we all know. But God, we still all try. Then go and sin again, thus is our nature.
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im personally not religios. this was just written out of insperation. i gave up on god 4 hospital trips ago, 10 IV'S ago, 20 times throwing up ago. i was just inspired to write a poem other people might relate to. the write and the speaker are different. dont confuse them. consider it a piece of social satire if you wish.
right. hmm yeah. we all deserve to die. hmm. many things can be claimed to be sin. and our morals whispers the words such as god, paradise, hell..those are meaningles words to me. we shouldn't rely on something high and mighty so that we could feel better about ourselves. we should do the right thing for our own good, not for something that might not be there..
I like the pictures on all your poems too. I dont know how to do that.
I hear the truth when I read this aloud. Its a poem that can relate to anyone who doesn't believe they are sinless. I think the larger font at the last line was a nice touch. Although there were some lines that were too long in my opinion, like you were supposed to read it faster than the other lines to match the flow, if you understand what i mean. But most of all I like how its seems very much like you went with your thoughts, not trying too hard to make every line rhyme or to keep it up to text book strictness.
wow, that is true *claps and pop*
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town of the sinners. you know if you belong.