Unforgiven:intro
So many times she thought it was over. So many times she thought the monster had left and so many times she was wrong.The monster was brother. When Lela's parents died the only one left to take care of her was her brother,Brandon. Brandon had a rep on their street as being a killer. That rep lead police to re-open her parents murder. The prime suspect:Brandon. Her brother was like the devil to her. He had tried to kill her ten times in the pat month and put her in the ER 15 times and other things to Lela that made the police put her in a foster home. Docters said her brother was geting better, he was becoming nicer. Lies,Lela told the docters, all lies. The docters soon belived her after he killed one of his docters. But Lela tried to put that behind her. After all the was ten years ago.
sorry but this is only the intro.
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sweeet keep going it is a excellent attention grabber 2
ANIMEGIRL07
2008-08-02 10:11:18
WOW!!i think i'll like ur stories.
RITSUKA1234
2008-07-25 14:03:22
you got my attention and great job on the introduction *pop*
LUNAR
2008-07-19 15:04:01
thats so cool!!!
HYONO
2008-06-07 12:39:40
Oooooohhhhhhhh.....*starry eyes* I only see a few misspellings, but I love it sooooo far!! ^.^
SERVANTOFGUILTNAEDWARD
2008-05-19 07:06:32