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 i told you i would love you forever

and you told me the same

but now i see

you words were a lie

cause u left me

now i'm all alone

you gave me hope

then tore it away

you warmed my cold heart

then you destroyed it

you played with me like a doll

then threw me away when you had you fun

i loved you

but my love was never returned

i wish  i could go back in time

to fix what went wrong

but i cant cause you didnt want me

but time has passed my wounds still bleed

but i'v relized that your love and mine was just a lie

i stand alone and try to forget

but i just want to die

cause seeing you brings back memories

and it conjurs a pain no one can see.......

i turn my back on you

not wanting to see your face

but i know i will always love you

even when you dont love me


i dont care anymore....

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i like ur poem and i am going throw something vary simuler to it but still i think u have realy good talent for poetry

2008-10-06 14:34:28


i really like this poem and i believed in it one time but now i have experienced love that i never thought i could have...thats why i no longer live in dispare but, now i know that it doesn't last long and i have lost it all...

2008-08-18 16:02:33


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