ART + LIFE
my very long poem!
Death!
You said “I loved you”
I thought “yea right”
You said “forgive me”
I asked “what for”
You said its not working
I stared and thought well yea
you screamed “YOU WHORE!”
You shoved me
I stared wide-eyed
You picked me up
I said nothing
You said “I loved you I swear”
I finally said “a whore?! Me!?”
your eyes water and you said “you cheated on me”
I shook my head
You pulled out a gun
I whispered “no way”
You said this is the only way
I tried to stop you
You put your hand out and stopped me first
Tears fell from out eyes
You pulled the trigger
I dropped to the ground
You laughed
I looked
You stared and smirked
I whispered “You bastard!” and started to leave
You grabbed my arm and pulled me to a hug
I beat my fist against your chest
You let me go and stood still
I left
You walked home thinking of what to do next
I sat at my computer
I got an email
It said
“I’m sorry I tricked you.
I needed to know what you’d do
Tonight it’s the real thing, I promise you.
I love you so!”
I ran to your house
You answered the door and took me to your room
I said “don’t kill yourself please!”
You hugged me and said “I have to”
You kissed me one last time
I cried once more
You grabbed a knife and stabbed yourself
I left still crying
I found a gun
Put it to my head
Dropped it and whispered “I cant”
I suddenly fell
A knife was in my back
I saw you laughing and you said
“Fuck you! You @$%# whore!”
Two tears fell from my eyes
You left as I died
You fell into the water under the bridge by your house
You drowned
My soul laughed
HA! Fuck you! You bastard!
You got what you disserved
You said you loved me! I knew you lied
But I tried to pretend you didn’t
But FUCK YOU! I hated you! You tricked me
You killed me! I hope you burn in hell!
My soul drifted to heaven.
I saw people trying to save me
God sent me back I wasn’t to die
I awoke a week later
My best guy friend lay by my side
His head on my bed
I woke him up
He hugged me to death
We suddenly kissed
Shocked to death!
You said “I loved you”
I thought “yea right”
You said “forgive me”
I asked “what for”
You said its not working
I stared and thought well yea
you screamed “YOU WHORE!”
You shoved me
I stared wide-eyed
You picked me up
I said nothing
You said “I loved you I swear”
I finally said “a whore?! Me!?”
your eyes water and you said “you cheated on me”
I shook my head
You pulled out a gun
I whispered “no way”
You said this is the only way
I tried to stop you
You put your hand out and stopped me first
Tears fell from out eyes
You pulled the trigger
I dropped to the ground
You laughed
I looked
You stared and smirked
I whispered “You bastard!” and started to leave
You grabbed my arm and pulled me to a hug
I beat my fist against your chest
You let me go and stood still
I left
You walked home thinking of what to do next
I sat at my computer
I got an email
It said
“I’m sorry I tricked you.
I needed to know what you’d do
Tonight it’s the real thing, I promise you.
I love you so!”
I ran to your house
You answered the door and took me to your room
I said “don’t kill yourself please!”
You hugged me and said “I have to”
You kissed me one last time
I cried once more
You grabbed a knife and stabbed yourself
I left still crying
I found a gun
Put it to my head
Dropped it and whispered “I cant”
I suddenly fell
A knife was in my back
I saw you laughing and you said
“Fuck you! You @$%# whore!”
Two tears fell from my eyes
You left as I died
You fell into the water under the bridge by your house
You drowned
My soul laughed
HA! Fuck you! You bastard!
You got what you disserved
You said you loved me! I knew you lied
But I tried to pretend you didn’t
But FUCK YOU! I hated you! You tricked me
You killed me! I hope you burn in hell!
My soul drifted to heaven.
I saw people trying to save me
God sent me back I wasn’t to die
I awoke a week later
My best guy friend lay by my side
His head on my bed
I woke him up
He hugged me to death
We suddenly kissed
Shocked to death!
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not bad ^^
JFREEDAN
2006-08-25 15:17:29
luv it!
SANDRA145
2006-08-23 10:10:03
wow wat a poem u have a pure talent for them
STRAYKAT52
2006-08-23 09:24:52