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when life goes by

i made this im new with this i just liked it

I see myself in this black

It's where the evil shall attack

 Where others go this scary way

There's no one to call for help

When life ends without a yelp

So here is my only cry

For someone to fly right by

 

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Tags: black,  life,  dark  Added 2007-06-26 08:28:37
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man thats really good im ok but i think your way better

MICHIYO16


2007-06-29 23:44:33


i love it!u should make more!im not good at rhyming so all my poems are free verse poems.urs is awesome!

SORASWIFE


2007-06-26 09:29:04


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