oh see can you see
oh, see, can you see,
whats rises from the sea,
and touches the sky,
and makes it glow.
oh, see, can you see,
what follows the rainbow
to that land
in the sky?
oh,see,can you see
what follows the rain,
and what in there
is what you know?
oh, see,can you see,
what follows my heart, of course,
no you cant,
for nothing doth follows the rainbow in my heart.
oh, see, can you see,
what falls form the sky,
for it is my tears and doth go.
oh, see, can you see,
where it doth goes,
for my heart is not with me,
ond it doth go.
oh, see, can you see,
why i do feel so,
i feel so low for what i dont know.
oh, see, can you see,
why i doth fall,
into byss of witch i crawl,
oh, see, can you see,
where that light goes,
away form me,
can you tell me, where it goes?
something i just made up. i know its sad, strange cause i didnt feel it when i started, then later on it turned into this. its no ones falit, so dont ask.
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that was beautiful. Dark, weird, and sad yet kind of confusing. #_# either way its... I really can't describe it.
KITTEN4LYFE
2007-12-29 15:53:15
Beautiful, just beautiful!!!^^
LOLAGIRL
2007-11-19 23:34:00
unique.....starnge.....peciular...yet, beautiful....
SASUKEBLOSSOM
2007-10-12 18:08:13
oo i like it
SWEETLEEKI6
2007-10-06 23:04:01
its a great poem^^
RIKUSUKA
2007-09-30 17:06:19
it's nice, but it could use some editing
FANTASYANGEL
2007-09-28 22:38:09
Great job!
RAINPOURSINTHEHEART
2007-08-30 16:47:39
wow!
CHICKA3
2007-08-20 18:22:08
i agree its really great ^^ way better then anything that i could ever write
0LOVELESS0BELOVED0
2007-08-17 23:57:10
Wow, this is really great!! And, by the way, doth is awesome. Ignore that person below me XP
ROCKSTARJULIET
2007-08-11 21:15:16
i have a few complaints about this... 1: you used the word "doth" about a million times more than is allowed unless you are trying to be funny. 2:your spelling was pretty off on this one... i liked the bullet a great deal more than this one
GRINZOR
2007-08-07 21:29:52