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THE WEPONS FALL:An Inyuashyua Fan Mix

disclaimer:i do not own any of the inyuashua charicters! i did reuse names of other charecters because of writers block!____________________________________

{BREAK OFF= because of my troubles getting this started, i never found a good way to introduce rena. you are going to be placed behind the eyes and mind of rena, a regular sized girl,with long silver hair and blue eyes, wearing, today, a fine, first day outfit: a neatly ironed white, butten up shirt, with a kirspy new dark blue skirt that flows down to her knees, kne high white socks(as they all are) and black sneakers. now, on with the story!!}

the hot wind of the dying summer session beats down on the back of your neck, bringing sweat to the surface.'ugh, the end of summer break!' you moan inside of your head. feeling the last of summer slip through your fingers, you push your way through the crowd of new faces and old, trying to get to the corner of the courtyard, where you always stand at, talking with your friends and such. hard as it is to find a path through the people, you finally make it there, taking a deep breath of relief.

"hey, renay-chan!" yells a shorter girl, with longer silver hair tied back into a long, low ponytail. as see closes in, you can clearly see what shes wearing: a medium-length kimono of blue, white, with a little hint of purple,a dark, royal blue obi, kne high socks, and a pair of white sneakers for gym class. she closes up on you, her shining blue eyes peering at you with greetings, then gives you a bow from the waist and a smile. you, inlike, return it.

"isnt it to hot to be wearing a kimono,  kyrio?" askes a taller girl,with short, black hair with brown eyes, wearing shorts, a plain, white tee, ankle socks, and white sneakers as while, abvuostly an athletic girl. a smirk riaisnig from her mouth. "hey, ryoko!" yips kyrio, with another bow towards ryoko."hi, rena." she says,while returning kyrio's bow. "hi, kyrio! hi ryoko!" you say exitiedly, happy to see your friends again.you beam a smile.

"how was your summer break?" you ask. "was geat!" kyrio pipes up first, "wish it wasnt over, though." "dont we all," replys ryoko.

"well, anything good happen?" you ask, trying to get more details.

"not realy. i just went to that hotsprings up on the mountian behind that shrine, ya know it right?"

"ya, the one with the big tree?" you answer.

"yep, was realy relaxing, and cheap! ill have to drag you up there sometime!"kyrio says with a giggle."you to, ryoko! you seem realy tense." she says with concern in her voice.

"ah, its nothing, reaky. its just that, seems how the old gym teacher died in that car crash, they've been intrviewing people." she says with a slight saddness still left in her voice.'poor ryoko.' you think, 'mr.march was the only one to see her strength and bring it up. if it wasnt for him, she would be sooo deprest right now.'

"he was a good teacher" you say. you all bow your heads as if in prayer, but it doesnt last long. suddenly, hands grasp your lower stomache. you bend in surpirses, fearing as though the hands are about to drap lower to more previate areas! bending, you feel the owner of the hands behinde you, keeping you from bend to far,they lean forward and prrs "good morning, rena!!!!!!!" you turn your head to see a taller, taller then ryoko, gyu with orange hair and blue eyes, a bright read jacket, black tee-shirt, slightly baggy blue jeans, and, through your minds eye, a pair of black cat ears, a big catty smile, a black tail, and a very affacenent prring rub of the hed aginst the side of your neck. you yell, relieving your sudden brust of fear, "oh, shinzo!!"

and there i end!!!!!!!^^ comment please!!!!!! and i might be able to add on to it every now and then, so dont come back day to day.......mabe sundays......ah, whenever you want to look!!!!! just dont expect it to be updated fast!!!!!^^


its not that good, i know!! but i was donig it on the basic tokyopop form, didnt work on it before, so, ya know!!it dosent fixs the things im used to neglecting!! but please commenit!!its going to be short, some of the names and profils im still working on, so...please come back every now and then to check for up-dates!!(oh, and sorry for the guys who read this!!i just wrote it as it came to me!!)

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Nya!! I like it u shoould keep going with it (a friend of mine told me the same thing :p) *pop* and *clip*

2007-12-25 22:42:32


i really like it ^^

2007-11-30 21:12:45


*POP* Lov it!!!^^

2007-11-19 23:37:55


I finally read it~ Sugoi~~ The only real thing I saw wrong with it was the spelling and some grammar mistakes. I would be really happy to fix them for you! Please continue writing! *searches for subscription thingy* Rawr~ xS

2007-11-04 20:22:49


Great story^^

2007-09-30 17:19:46


wow

2007-08-20 18:28:51


jeez, your good :x

2007-08-19 12:03:45


wtg. keep writing. *pop**clip*

2007-08-18 21:26:58


wows thats awesome!!! i have to say i love the first paragraph the most the detail was wow

2007-08-17 23:48:28


OMG GOOOD!! hehehe...niice work!!

2007-08-17 22:11:16


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