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My ear is bleeding that sucks my heart is taken but not hostage why cant you talk to me  or for that matter notice me i dont know wat to do or wat to feel anymore i needed another half to make me whole but the other half is empty too is it to far to kill a mocking bird wen it never song to begin with  if you love some one let them go if you dont wat then i never thoght id be so confused untill now i guess im not the type of girl to say wat i feel and do wat i say i never mattered anyway


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Tags: i,  feel  Added 2007-09-06 11:49:30
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Is this even a poem? it does not have a rhyme scheame.I sugest putting it into stanzas intead of squishing all the lines together.

KAGOMEANDKIKYO


2007-09-16 15:04:46


i wasnt done

XIOUBUKI


2007-09-06 17:37:29


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