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I wrote this poem long ago,so i wont hold it against u if u dont understand it.
You speak of happiness
in a world long forgotten
my bright eyes have darkened
from to much time in my still short life
You and i were more kindered than my true kin
If i could call you mother
If he cant be my true father,
then let me be reborn as you and call him "lover" instead
You sing of happiness and i hear your voice always
giving me towards a life you could only imagine
I will be there for you
My breath will be your breath
and this heart will be ours
cute!
very nice
i will never get tired of this poem is really awesom
love it
sweett poem
>.< that's so cool.It's like you're gifted by the muses or something.
This is a great piece of work.
love it
its really good... i like it!!!!!!
that was sooooo good i love it
wOw that was amazing
its awesome x3
i love it
Hey your a good poet maybe I can show my work to you someday.
SPARKS1212
28.03.2008 06:56 AM