ART + LIFE
All alone
Nobody can help the boy who is in the darkness
He by himself
Crying out for some one to help
He is fighting to get out but,
Nobody knows wats happening
Nobody is there to see it or hear it
the only thing there with him is darkness
he is still crying has the darkness is starting to
eat him and make him evil...
but the cries out one last time.."help"...
that last call reached some one
some one who is the only person that
was there the whole and that someone
is the darkness who ate
him......
the boy was never noticed at school and every where he went nobody cared what happend to him........this is why the darkness found him.....becaues was Alone
I Do not know!! well its like a poem and its about a boy and the darkness is coming!!! oooooooooo
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hmmm...the sentences dun connect...nor do they give any sense of empathy......like....Nobody can help the boy within his own darkness...no one will try and all deny their powerlessness with hatred towards him...His cries for help are nothing more than annoyances now...A constant reminder that darkness comes and hope is lost and there is no escape for...Like there is no escape from the sound of his screaming...Soon very soon they'll be joining him...and that is the fear that nibbles at their souls through the sound of that one boy's despair and anguish...a prologue of their own fate....
CUPEROS
2008-08-04 15:15:23
So sad.
KEITA
2006-12-20 16:22:47
so sad. I know how he feels T_T
JOKER9463
2006-10-25 18:48:49
Dam thye last comment means nothing i hit the wrong button here is the real one.that was sad and cool and ya *sniff*
KIAW
2006-10-24 16:26:53
thats sad, but its really good, i like it, your very good at this kind of thing....
BLEACH7ROX
2006-10-23 18:59:50
Deep...
RYUO
2006-10-23 15:53:43
lessee...maybe i should update more of my fictions...?? yours is good, i--i just decided to delete my books on here *goes off to delete it*
EVILTWIN
2006-10-23 09:56:47
Uh huh... yes this could turn into something good. Which reminds me that I haven't been updating my stories...........
RUMBLINGROZE
2006-10-22 19:25:09
Hm. Interesting. Is it like a poem? I think it's a good poem.
MIMI2
2006-10-22 17:41:07
Hmm, started out kinda like a poem. I like the message, although it doesn't really bode well for wanna-be loner me. Damn you're creative. You and Michelle. I can't come up with a plot to save my life. :D
ISOLA
2006-10-22 17:40:51