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Deathly Roses

My soul was once whole, now it's torn,

With no one to heal me, I wish I wasn't born.

 

My heart, shattered, my life on a thread,

Without you, my life is full of dread.

 

You carry my heart in the palms of your hands,

Though you do not know that my blood is in sands.

 

I have lost everything, and now I'm blue,

Though every moment all I think of is you.

 

I have died many times, and now I avow

That twelve bloody roses are all I have now.

 

Each of the roses has a special part,

But your final black rose has at last pierced my heart.


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Though this poem was wrote because of me..I now feel the same because of you(well except for the 12 part)..I doubt you will ever get on tokyopop again but...I Still love you...I am waiting..waiting for you..Even if it takes forever...Because I love you Harold..I really do...I love you...I get on every day even though I know you will not be here...Just waiting...In a continuation of lonelyness...

2007-10-16 11:37:43


That was really great! Sad, you know, yeah, but great!

2007-09-08 11:38:37


very dark, sad, and emotional. deep

2007-08-31 23:12:45


its very good.... but very sad.

2007-08-25 05:24:08


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